So Elisa asked for one and all to do a loss piece at their hall. But for what source? Why her book blogfest of course This means that cat had to forgo funny as such a thing is never sunny. But I did get a chance to once again stretch my skill, as I went about loss at my rhyming hill. No idea where this came from, just wrote the title and off I went with my little rhyming bum.
I long to dry your tears of rain,
Did you know the cat had such a thing in him? I guess the lights in my head are not so dim. Although I think now I need to go get in a fight with Drazin or Flappy. So I can go from sad back to happy. Anyway the facts are you should check out her blog and book and that is all from my nook. Of course I have to do one more thing lass and that is wave goodbye and walk off wiggling my little rhyming ass.
Later all, have a nice fall.
Tears of Rain
I long to dry your tears of rain,
Gazing as they ripple with pain.
Aching over a loss so dear.
Shattering life's very chain.
Every sense feeling me near.
Reflections loom with every thought.
Envisioning all we shall never do,
Lingering on hopes untrue.
Shadows spur such belief.
Darkness spreads eternal view.
Truth erupts further grief.
Wishing such pain I never brought.
Your tears continue their dance,
While in your wandering trance.
Life's meaning ever elusive.
Existence questioned surroundings advance.
Feelings true remain reclusive.
I weep at the sight of you distraught.
Longing for just one more,
Sight of me at the door.
Arms wrapping with cementing embrace.
Whispering I love you to whom you adore.
Voiding such an empty space.
Cursing it all for naught.
Thoughts of woe grow dimmer,
As the past starts to simmer.
Agony's grasp loses control.
Heaven senses a slight glimmer.
The little things begin to console.
Over wonders love has taught.
Thankful that last tear was caught.
Giving you some peace
Knowing our time was not in vain.
Humbled by grief's release.
For in your heart I shall remain.
Relishing these joyful tears of rain.
Did you know the cat had such a thing in him? I guess the lights in my head are not so dim. Although I think now I need to go get in a fight with Drazin or Flappy. So I can go from sad back to happy. Anyway the facts are you should check out her blog and book and that is all from my nook. Of course I have to do one more thing lass and that is wave goodbye and walk off wiggling my little rhyming ass.
Later all, have a nice fall.
Pat,
ReplyDeleteTears of sadness all too often seen
Never fear as they are tied to emotions
I would rather not see tears of pain
But rather tears of joy of rare occasions
Hank
Yep, I knew
ReplyDeleteit was in brain file number two!
When I took that tour of your mind
not knowing what I would find.
:)
oh, my, Pats now I wanna hug you.
ReplyDeleteSuch a magnificent and deeply touching poem! You've outdone yourself.
Yeah the later is better to see
ReplyDeleteBut to often it is the first that does not give glee
hahaha if anyone knew it was you
After reading a book or two
And going for a stroll in my brain
But I've upgraded the locks so no more boarding that train..haha
We'll just nod and say we did
My OCD may flip its lid..hahaha
Thanks glad you found it well done
Was a different task from my usual fun
Are you kidding? I've never left!
ReplyDeleteOnce I got in I couldn't leave this stuff!
You are really really good at what you do! I'm going to have to link back to this blog sometime soon.
ReplyDeletehahaha strat
ReplyDeleteGuess I'm just a doomed cat
I guess that's why "dear" keeps popping into my head
Every now and then causing me dread..haha
It's always appreciated linking back to the loon
Even at High Noon..haha
Even though Blogger seems to have it out for you
As your blog never shows up in my blog list to view
smiles. it is cool to see the tender side of the cat...sensitive write at that...well played friend...
ReplyDeleteI think this is my favorite post of yours. Very well done!
ReplyDeletePat and the cat are so multi-talented. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe cat lets it out once a year or so
ReplyDeleteBut the little rhyming you know part he'll always let flow..haha
Who knew I could get a favorite one
Without my usual craziness being spun
Yeah the cat is up for a challenge of most any kind
At least when it comes to his rhyming behind..haha
I agree with Steph. This is def your best!
ReplyDeleteoh, I have some influence in what you think?
ReplyDeleteI could push you to the brink.
Yes, it would only be for the better
and you would just sound sweeter!
hahaha.
You may get the urge to have a zoo
and let more animals come to you.
Guess if this is the best
ReplyDeleteI passed the blogfest loss test..haha
haha I suppose it could help me be nice
Even if I had to say dear twice
But then I might suffer a breakdown
From spreading such niceness across town..haha
And if I ever get the urge to have a zoo
I just come hope and visit the 14 cat crew
That will fix that quite fast
And it will not last..haha
If you start to talk with a Midwestern accent
ReplyDeleteyou will beg me to leave and stop the torment.
Oh, the fourteen cat crew
and a wiener dog, too!
That was actually very well done Mr. Cat. Beatifully written! I was touched until I got the image of you "wiggling" your rhyming ass. lol
ReplyDeleteYou done Elisa good!
haha yes if that comes to be
ReplyDeleteI'll have to fly down to your sea
And set your free
So out of my head you will flee..haha
Yeah the wiener dog
Is just one more pet in the zoo cog
I made you touched did I
Oh aren't I just a swell guy
But a cat does wiggle their ass
But it was done with class..haha
So much depth inside this rhyme,
ReplyDeleteYou really were on spot this time.
And to rhyme the word "reclusive"
For me that would've been elusive
You're quite gifted and so is your cat
Thanks for sharing this and that
but mostly this.
Patt Hatt never fails. His rhyming hits the nails!
ReplyDeleteThe cat has lots of spots
ReplyDeleteSo he just played connect the dots
Reclusive and elusive just came out
With quite the ease for this shout
I guess Pat and the cat can share the gift
And there will be no rift..haha
Hopefully it does not hit them too hard
They are pointy and could send one running across the yard
Wow, who put the apple scent in your catnip:)
ReplyDeleteReally nice verse. You've showed other styles before, so why should loss be ignored, for with every laughtrack,hides a tear that wants to get out, without cry, we'd never know why, we laugh at all.
Anyhow, I'm not on a very good rhyming roll these past two days. But this is a very good piece, I really like it, especially the end lines, like those a lot.
Perhaps it was the talk of lit last night that sent the cat into a fit-lol
Woah, that was really good... you pull off somber poems really well Pat.
ReplyDeleteYeah every once in a while the cat stretches his skill
ReplyDeleteFrom the usual fluff at his rhyming hill
True would not appreciate the laughs as much
If sad wasn't there at least a touch
hahaha yeah all that talk of the lit
Really through the cat into a fit
First foray into somber today
Thanks, glad it was a nice display
Another great one! :P
ReplyDeletewow, this is amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteWOW! Beautiful!
ReplyDeletenice dude :)
ReplyDeleteLovely, Pat. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteAwww... lovely even if it did end with your little rhyming ass :)
ReplyDeleteWow Pat this is amazing! really! are you ok?:)lol
ReplyDeleteseriously is nice Pat!
The cat never ceases to amaze me.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Lola
A sweet and lovely verse so tender
ReplyDeletePat in all his rhyming splendour
To not ask would be remiss;
In real life do you talk like this?
:-)
I need a recession from the depression D=
ReplyDeleteWell done :) I enjoyed your prose.
ReplyDelete......dhole
Nice!
ReplyDeleteAnother well done rhyme, now it's dinner time.
ReplyDeleteSee what I did there? 8D
Pat Im following you:)
ReplyDeleteah You are follow me! You dont have to do, thanks so much, I lov eyour blog!:)(hope we dont have a lot of die bunnies:)
ReplyDeleteMy heart melted...are you so sweet to write this.
ReplyDeleteI like the tears of rain, beginning and ending.
Maybe you can write a love poem again ?
Expect anything less than great
ReplyDeleteat my plate?...haha
Glad I could amaze
As you gaze
Happy you liked my addition to your blogfest
And I passed the test
Nice indeed
At my feed
Lovely too
What am I to do
hahaha I will never not end it without my saying
That always has to be displaying
The cat can be nice once in a while
Just generally not my style
So yeah I am okay
At least for today
Hopefully it will never cease
Or you may call the rhyming police
Nope in real life I just go day to day
When the SSDD dismay..haha
Don't worry a recession will come soon
From the rhyming loon
Glad it was enjoyed by you
Thanks for the view
Nice
Times twice
Yes I see what you did there
with your rhyme pair
Even if it was any easy one
But you had to eat and run..haha
Thanks for the follow of the cat
And I follow back anyone who actually comments at my mat
The bunny thing was a one time deal
Besides it was fake and not real..haha
And you buddy Fox sent it along
So don't blame me for it being all wrong..hahaha
All this affection the cat is not used too
Need to go back to talking about the loo..hahaha
I guess I can be sweet
And glad you liked my loss beat
A love poem again you say
I suppose that can be done my way
Not sure if I'll go full on explicit bliss this time
But I'm sure I can give it a chime
not test you are nice dear:)
ReplyDeleteI am totally impressed by your talent. I couldn't write any kind of poem, even if my life depended on it.
ReplyDeleteOh but I love your library here. This background is my dream room!
ReplyDeleteVery lovely rhyme. :)
Nicely written I'm sure she liked it.
ReplyDeletegreat rhymes
ReplyDeleteVery well written rhyme.
ReplyDeleteGreat as ever.
ReplyDeleteAnother with the dear
ReplyDeleteOh the fear..haha
I'm sure if your life depended on it
You could make up something, whether miss or hit.haha
Yeah be nice to have such a room
But in mine movies upon movies would bloom
Sounds like many did
As no one flipped their lid
Great rhymes
Fun times
Well written is usually the case
At least I try at my place
Great as ever
Guess I'm just so clever
I am always in awe of poets as it has never been something I could do. Thanks for being a part of the bloghop.
ReplyDeleteI blog hop away
ReplyDeleteAnd yeah don't suffer no dismay
I'm more of a nut then a poet
Although this may not show it..haha